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The 64 Impalas engine roared to life as Niko Mikhail floored the gas. Traveling well above the speed limit of the Oregon town of thirty-five. The car lay cluttered in pain pills and cheap booze. Niko a recent immigrant from Russia had yet to break free of his addictions, he ****** his head back downed a pill and followed with a gulp of vodka. The residential neighborhoods intertwined with pine trees as the car reached a speed were now only blurred visions could be perceived. His brother Rummy lay sleep beside him, unaware to the reckless driving of his brother. Niko pulled into a vacant parking lot,waking his brother up. "Are we home." "Not yet I have to go talk to a few of my friends. Niko reached into the cars compartment and returned with a stainless steel pistol he called the arm of the lord,his law of the land. Niko headed across the street to the pool hall. As he entered the room eyes darted towards him. The smile on his face contrasted to the threatening stares of the pool halls patrons. As Niko headed to the back office